What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
This week: HORIZON
From down at the bottom, it’s dark and the air is musky.
Last night’s rain created a small slippery slope on the trip up.
Mud covered our boots with a thick brown stain, the smell was unbearable as we continued to walk through the puddles, some of us mistakenly took mud over poop.
The trail up the mountain was step and since the sun was slowly coming up from the night sky, the temperature was still fairly low.
When we finally got to the top, the mountain was dry, the air was clear and fresh, and seeing the lightly dim stars behind us with the bright sun making its horizon ahead was so beautiful to be able to witness both evolutions at once.
Beautiful
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Thank you! 🙂
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Best wishes.
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You too.
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🙂
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real good, congrats
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Thank you! 🙂
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There was a bad flood that impacted the place where I work. One area had raw sewage seeping into it–not pretty! It was a while before we began to recover and reach the horizon, so to speak.
I enjoyed the metaphors in this piece.
http://hickswyliedna.blogspot.com/2014/10/undoing-damage.html
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Ew! Thank you! 🙂
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Well written, I enjoyed the imagery and the metaphor. I could envision each step and feel the experience.
Here is my story: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2014/10/horizon.html
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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