What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
This week: CLUTCH
Dressed in black from head to toe, silver jewelry, and wore dark make up on her face; she was asking for it as she walked around the party.
As others around her whispered about her appearance, her eyes sparkled and she got off on being the center of attention, she could take the phase “drop dead gorgeous” to new heights after tonight.
She wasn’t bothered by the words of others next to her, she kept her distance from the ones who were drunk, but that didn’t mean she didn’t stay away from the ones who were intoxicated by her, whether it was right or not, she was like a spider, lacing them onto her web before wrapped them and feed on them.
She knows what people assume of her, but sadly it was far from the truth.
She had the exterior of somebody that was not to be messed with, but on the inside she was a sweetheart that wore her heart on her sleeve, went home to wipe away her disguise, take off her costume, and put her spiked clutch purse back in the closet along with her combat boots.
WOW this is super amazing….I love the details…and the punch ! Love it.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Ouch? I’m not holding hands with her no matter how hot she is!
Nice story!
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Lol that might be a good call! And thank you! 🙂
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I love how alive the imagery is in this story. And, judging from the picture, she wears a lot of armor, but it’s wicked awesome armor 🙂
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I didn’t realize I was logged in under another name…sheesh! This is Lillie McFerrin. Sorry!!!
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Oh it’s perfectly fine dear! 🙂
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Yes it is! And thank you! 😀
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loved it! 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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liked your imagery 🙂 very creative
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Love the imagery; very vivid and the contrast of her true personality to the image she portrays. x
http://40somethingundomesticateddevil.blogspot.co.uk/2014/01/five-sentence-fiction-clutch.html
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Thank you Lizzie 🙂
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Very well done! I like the picture I can definitely see when I read this one.
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Yes! Thank you! 🙂
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